Published August 12, 2007
Welcome to my new rap,
music is my weapon, not a gat.
I'm spitting to you dad,
No mom I ain't mean or sad.
Yo dad you can't stop me,
I'm the definition of a true G.
There's Bigger things to discuss,
It's time to say bye and leave you in the dust.
Proof and 2Pac never died,
They are in my heart, and mind.
I know the beef will never die,
if you think it will, then that's a lie.
They say life goes by slow,
I spit fast like Twista fo sho.
It's up to me to bring the truth,
you can't run your mouth with one tooth.
I hate Bush and Laden,
When I come through my dad go hidin
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=O forget what they say....some work maybe it could be ok
.......keep up the good work ^_^
Ugh.
Rap is okay, but this one, if made into real song, would be really bad.
SORRY!
It's just that rap is only good if it's:
A) Unique, like is talking about someone in particular and in an original way, like Lose Yourself (Eminem).
B) Has a message, like Where is the Love by Black Eyed Peas, that touches the listener and conveys it in a smart way.
C) Is just fun and connects everyone, like Gold Digger. It's also centered about one thing, not Bush and Laden/ 2Pac.